Sunday, October 14, 2012

Alien Prompt Final Rough Draft


Reagan Campbell
October 1, 2012
Alien Prompt
            The only reason I got out of bed this morning was because I could smell my favorite chocolate chip muffins freshly taken out of the oven.
            “Riley, time to get up! Let’s go! You’re going to be late!” Next thing I knew I was blinded by the light shining in my eyes when my Mom came in and opened all my shutters.
            “Mom can I stay home today? I have 2 quizzes and you know how bad I am in Spanish.” I secretly crossed my fingers underneath my covers, waiting for Mom to respond.
            “No, Riley. How many times did I tell you? You may not skip school whenever you would like. I pay big bucks for you to attend this private school and you need those grades to get into college.”
            “What if I don’t want to go to college Mom? I am sick of hearing about it. I can’t sit for 30 minutes without hearing the words: GPA, college, or SAT. I hate it!”
            “Oh stop your complaining. Get up. I made you some muffins!”
            I took my time brushing my teeth, and decided to wear my pink pearl earrings to give my uniform some color, since I have to wear maroon every day.
            When I got in the car, I noticed it was very foggy outside, and there was an unusual amount of traffic for 7:23 in the morning. I prepared for the road rage building up inside my Mom, because she is probably the most impatient person I have ever met in my entire life.
            Shockingly, I made it to school on time. Having history class first period is such a drag. I can’t stand it! It’s like everything I learn in that class goes in one ear and out the other. That might explain my B- in that class. As usual, as soon as the bell rang, Mrs. Sill began her lesson for the day. I got out my favorite pink pen and realized I left my jacket at home. I could already tell today was going to be a bad day.  For Irvine, California the weather was pretty chilly for the end of September. Did I ever mention, I hate cold weather.
            The day went on, and just as I predicted, it was terrible. I should have guessed I would have a pop quiz in Chemistry! I heard an announcement on the intercom, or at least what was supposed to be an announcement on the intercom, but being that the hallways are so packed and crowded, it was nearly impossible to hear what someone is saying to you, even if you are standing 3 feet apart!
            I had a strange vibe as I walked into fourth period. I wondered why everyone was so quiet and why everyone looked so depressed and confused? I mean, it is only a Tuesday! Mr. P. told me to sit down in my seat, as he repeated what he has just told the rest of the class.
            “Now everyone, I don’t want you to be scared. We are all in this together. “
            I leaned over to my best friend Brooklyn, “Brooke, what is he rambling on about today?”
            “I don’t know Riley, but by the way everyone is acting, I have a strange feeling this isn’t good.”
            “I need you all to stay in your seats and wait until I get further instructions.”
            What was going on? A fire drill?
            “I have received news that aliens are attacking and there is a large possibility we will all die in the next 24 hours.” Exclaimed Mr. P.
            Silence filled the room. Jayden let out a gasp and started to cry hysterically. Sophie had a blank stare on her face, and just about everyone else showed no emotion.
            “Is this a joke? Aliens? Are there a such thing?” I knew before even turning around that Aiden was the one who asked that question.
            “Aiden please be quiet. This is no time for questions or nonsense.”
            The first thing that came to mind was; I need to find Ellis. Ellis, my 11-year-old brother is a 6th grader this year. I guess it is somewhat confusing because my little brother is not so little. He has towered over me for the past 2 years.
            “Excuse me, Mr.P.? If this is real, I need to go find my brother Ellis and tell him what is going on!”
            “Riley, I think he is fine. His teacher should have informed him, I promise he is in good hands.”
            At this point, all I could think about was if I was going to survive or not, and from the sound of it, we are all going to die. I sprung up from my seat and dashed down the hall, counting the room numbers, searching for Ellis’ classroom! Room 8? 17? 12? All the numbers started to blend as I ran in a panic down the halls.
            “Where do you think you’re going young lady?”
            I ignored the Janitor because I had no time to answer questions right now.
I saw Ellis in the Biology lab and rushed in.
            “Ellis! Ellis! Are you O.K.?!”
            “Riley, I’m fine. Don’t embarrass me in front of my friends.”
            “Ellis, do you know what’s going on? Come with me.”
            “You can’t just take me out of class Riley!”
            “I can’t? Watch me!”
            “Pardon me, Mrs. Ray, I need Ellis, it is an emergency!”
            I grabbed his arm so tight his skin turned white. I gripped his arm when I rushed him down the hallway.
            “Ellis, I know this may sound weird, but I need you to listen to me. Loud and clear. Aliens are coming for us, and my teacher said only three hundred twenty-five people will be saved. There is barely any chance you or I will be chosen, so regardless, I need you to stay with me until they reveal the list on www.app.gov in about an hour or so. You got that?”
            Ellis stared at me like I had 3 heads. I gave him a minute to let the news sink in, knowing he was probably extremely confused and scared.
            Since this was so confusing for everyone, they cancelled class for the remainder of the day, and we sat and waited for the announcements to be made. It seemed to be the longest sixty minutes of my entire lifetime. Ellis and I wasted time by playing Sudoku on the floor of Mr. P’s room. Then all the sudden Mr. P stood up.
            “Students I need your attention. Look at the television in the corner of the room.”
            I waited in silence. Gripping his hand so tightly my fingers went numb, Ellis and I stared at the TV waiting to hear whose name would get pulled. Those 325 lucky people were the only ones saved from this mess. I took a second to remember this moment; when all I heard was the breathe of all my pupils, all I saw was the fall leaves outside the window, and all I felt was the warmth radiating from Ellis’ body.
            Today is April 21st. The day aliens came to take over this magnificent place I have grown to call: Earth. Little did I know this morning today would be this awful? I mean a pop quiz and waking up early was bad enough! I probably would have stayed in bed if I knew Aliens were coming to attack and there was a large possibility I might die!
            “Just stay calm. Breathe Riley, just breathe.” Ellis comforted me, as the time came closer to the drawing. I felt embarrassed when a single, warm tear ran down my face and onto my light pink sweater. I looked around me, and although there was a classroom full of people with all the same thoughts and feelings as I, I felt alone, scared, but most of all, vulnerable.
            “What happens if it’s you, Ellis?” I said in a shaky voice, trying to hide the fact I was trembling and terrified at the thought that I might die, or be chosen out of hundreds of people to survive this mess. Am I worth it? A butterfly flew past the window and landed on the leaf beside the windowsill. I took it as a symbol of hope during this dark, confusing time.
            “Riley, I think it is time. Let’s close our eyes.”
 “It’ll be over before we know it! Just know that I’ll never forget all the times we had together. You’re the best little brother I could ever ask for, Ellis.”
            I chose to show no emotion. I gave Ellis a look, just a look, and I knew he knew exactly what I meant. I positioned myself to the right, facing the television, because the names were about to be revealed. Three hundred twenty-five. Three hundred twenty-five lucky, yet unfortunate people who get to board that plane tomorrow at 3 o’clock sharp. All they can take is one tiny, brown, suitcase and one other human being.
            The screen went black and I heard a gasp among my classmates. I had never felt so scared. All of the sudden, a message appeared on the screen.
It read: “This is the Alien Protection Program (APP). In a moment, names will come to your screen. Everyone needs to stay calm, gather up all your family members, and seek shelter immediately after the names are called. You will have 4 hours to do so. Further instructions are to come. ”
Twelve people at a time, the names were revealed. I touched my rosary necklace praying to God that I would not get chosen. Ellis and my Mom were all I had. Three years ago, two days before my 13th birthday, my dad was killed in a plane crash. I have refused to ride on a plane since. My dad was my best friend, and I miss him dearly. Twelve more names appeared on the screen, and I scanned through them quickly, in fear. Fifteen minutes passed and I am starting to feel better, only three-dozen names were left. Ellis turned to me.
“I guess you were right. I thought you were crazy, but in reality, this whole situation is crazy.”
The last twelve names were revealed. I was terrified and quaking with fear. One eye at a time I looked up at the screen, scanning through the final list of names. I had to do a double take.
My name was on the screen.
I felt the beaming eyes of every person in that room staring at me. My emotions were both elated and guilty.
I was chosen.
“Oh my god. Riley, that’s your name. Riley Rouke.”
“Best of luck to you Riley. Class is dismissed. It has been a pleasure being your teacher, my children.” Those were the last words I ever heard from Mr. P.
The next thing I knew I was sitting on my couch. I stared at the wall infront of me. My smart phone buzzed.
“Riley Rouke, you have been chosen by the APP to be saved. You may take one other human being with you, under the age of twenty-one. Between the two of you, you may take on suitcase. We will arrive at your home in two hours and forty-six minutes. Only bring what is necessary.”
The first thing that came to mind was; where am I going and whom will I bring? I thought to myself, was it worth dragging Ellis into this, is this what he wishes to do? The clock was ticking. I told my mom what was going on and she told me not to worry. I rushed upstairs and grabbed the biggest suitcase I could find. This was easy considering we go on vacation all the time.
“Ellis, come here I need to speak to you!” I exclaimed.
“What?”
“I decided I am bringing you along with me. If I were to have anyone go through this mess with me, I would want you to be by my side. Help me pack! We have a little less than two hours!”
We packed only the things I needed to get by. It was hard packing for a place you didn’t know you were going to. The sky was getting darker as the day went on and a green glow filled the sky. I took a moment and sat by the window in my room, and collected myself. With barely any time left, I scurried downstairs and gave my mom a kiss and told her how much I loved her.
“Riley, Ellis, I need you two to stick together through all of this. Stay strong, and know that whatever happens I love you two and your father would be very proud of you.”
Just on time, I head a knock on the door.
“Coming!” I yelled.
Ellis standing by my side, I grabbed the suitcase, and headed out the door.
“Mom, we love you!!!!” We shouted so loud.
Although we were close with our father, our Mom has been there for us through everything.
“Get in the car kids, it is going to be a long ride to New Mexico.”
“New Mexico? Why are they taking us there?” Ellis asked.
“I don’t know, just stay quiet. Take a nap.”
The back of the stretch hummer limo wasn’t too shabby. We decided to rest, since the tall man in the suit said it would be a long ride.
A few hours later I woke up to the voice of the driver telling Ellis and I to grab our belongings. We have arrived. I guess we were both so drained from the craziness of the past twenty-four hours that we had slept longer than expected. As the sun blinded us as we stepped out of the vehicle, I saw a sign that read: Area 51- Roswell, New Mexico.
“Welcome to Pullman Ranch kids. The National Guard Center is straight ahead.”

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